2016年12月英语四级考试写作原文及答案(卷二)

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  Part I Writing (30 minutes)


  Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay. Suppose you have two options upon graduation: one is to take a job in a company and the other to go to a graduate school. You are to make a choice between the two. Write an essay to explain the reasons for your choice. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.


  [杨雅慧老师提供范文]


  Many students wonder whether they should pursue a master’s degree or enter the labor market to gain work experience right after undergraduate studies? As for me, I would choose to get a higher degree.


  One reason for this is that graduate study would allow me to make a better preparation for my future. Since most students attend universities for better job opportunities, with a master’s degree, one’s employability would greatly increase, as the professional training they have received would provide them with a flying start.


  Another reason would be that I can know about my interested subjects in more depth. Compared with undergraduate studies, attending graduate school give us the chance to connect more with the world’s cutting-edge knowledge. By conducting personal research and attending academic activities such as lectures and seminars, a student would be able to know their study topics more completely.


  In conclusion, I decide to further my study after graduation as I believe the deeper and more professional subject knowledge from gradate school would provide a better chance to achieve my career goals.


  (177 words)


  [杨老师解析]:


  在历年四六级写作话题中,教育类话题占了绝大多数。因此,在我们真经派四六级参考书目中,老师们也提供了很多教育类话题的词汇和例文。但面对给考生最接近的教育类话题,例如本次的毕业后打算做什么。能够得到更高的分数,除了要对熟知真经派四级写作逻辑框架外,积累与话题相关的素材和想法也是必备的技能之一。在这里,除了范文中的观点外,杨老师再为同学们提供另外几个关于支持考研的常用观点与论据,以便大家做更多的积累和翻译练习。


  1.投资未来:研究生学习往往被看做是学术渠道的专业训练,使得毕业生能够获得恰当的知识并准备进入他们渴望的职业领域。


  Invest in your future: Graduate school often acts as the academic version of professional training, enabling students to graduate with all the right knowledge and ready to jump straight into their desired careers.


  2.在人才市场脱颖而出:越来越的人选择考研,因此本科学历常常使应聘者在高水平的竞争者当中最先被淘汰。


  Get noticed in today’s job market. More people than ever are attending graduate school today, and because of this an undergraduate degree alone can sometimes fail to get you noticed alongside equally or more highly qualified candidates.


  3.随着大学学历被越来越看做是就业的敲门砖,在英国,11%是的就业者持有硕士学位,本科学历很难吸引雇佣者的目光。


  With university education in contemporary society increasingly viewed as a stepping stone to a right career, and 11% of the workforce (in the UK) now holding a graduate degree, bachelor degree holders are often struggling to appeal to employers.


  4.获得的不仅仅是学历。上研究生让你获得的不仅仅是专业技能和学历,你还可以得到更好的的个


  人发展和更广的与同学、学术界及行业专家的人脉关系。


  Get more than a qualification. Going to graduate school is more for the professional skills and a qualification, you would undergo a better personal development and make valuable connections with fellow graduate students, academics and industry experts.


  【分解练习】


段落

句子

  

逻辑框架模板

第一段

开题

1

很多学生想知道本科毕业后他们是应该继续读研究生还是进入劳动市场获得工作经验。

通过改写题目引入辩论话题。

2

对我来说,我选择获得更高的学位。

通过做出选择给出自己的答案。


第二段

原因一

3

第一个原因是研究生学习可以帮助我为自己的未来做一个更好的准备。

第一个原因

4

由于大部分学生上大学的目的是为了将来更好的工作机会,因此,有了硕士文凭,一个人的就业能力就会有大大的提高,因为他们所获得的专业知识可以帮助他们有更高的起点。

通过想原因的方式来扩展说明读研的第一个好处。


第三段

原因二

5

另一个原因是我可以对自己感兴趣的学科获得更深入的认识。

第二个原因

6

和本科学习比起来,读研给我们更多和当今世界最前沿的知识接触的机会。

用作比较的方式展开第二个好处

自由句

通过进行个人研究及参与学术活动,如讲座、研讨等,学生得以对自己研究的课题有更全面的了解。

具体说明该好处。


第四段

结论

7

总之,毕业之后我决定继续学习,因为我坚信研究生更深入更专业的知识会让我更容易实现将来的就业目标。

结尾段重申观点,并通过改写再次解释原因。



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