2017年06月四级考试写作真题解析卷3

2017/11/05 作者:小歪

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2017年06月四级考试写作真题解析卷3

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an advertisement on your campus website to sell a computer you used at college. Your advertisement may include its brand, specifications/features, condition and price, and your contact information. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

【范文】

Advertisement(A Well-maintain Computer on Sale)

As I am about to graduate and leave the campus, I am going to sell my personal computer at a low price.

It is a Lenovo ThinkPad that I bought in June, 2015. It is not big, but very functional. It has a four-core CPU, an independent display card of 2G, a hard disk of 500G and a screen of 15.6 inches. For the last two years, the laptop has served as my faithful aid and helped me finish most of my assignments and my thesis. There has appeared no fault in the process. I owe so much to it. But as my workplace has already offered me a more advanced working laptop, I find there is no necessity for me to have two. And I know that there must be some of my schoolmates who are more in need of the ThinkPad. Therefore, I determined to sell it.

I bought the laptop as the price of 4500 RMB. Now I will sell it at 1500 yuan or less. Anyone interested can contact me via email, and my mailbox is ***@126.com.

[解析]:这篇文章考察大家对生活中比较适用的应用文-广告文体-在大学校园的网站上出售电脑的广告。题目中明确告知了考生写作内容是“销售二手电脑”因此只需要将题干规定的要点(电脑整体情况、品牌、基本配置软硬件的运行情况,联系方式等)有序的组织起来就可以了。

逻辑框架分析:

【分解练习】

段落

句子

内   容

逻辑框架模板

第一段

开题

第1句

由于我即将毕业离开校园,故低价出售本人电脑。

开篇点名广告主题出售二手电脑。


第二段

 

第2句

于2015年6月购入的联想电脑

点名题干中要求的电脑品牌。

第3句

电脑尺寸不大,但是功能性很好。

点名电脑外观性能。

第4句

四核CPU,2G 独立显卡,500G 硬盘,15.6英寸显示屏。

具体指出电脑配置


第5,6,7句

在过去的两年里,这部电脑作为我忠实的得利助手帮我完成了大部分的学习任务和学术论文。期间没有出过任何问题,我的成绩大部分归功于我的电脑。

电脑好处多性能好。以激发同学们的购买欲。

第8..9句

由于我工作单位提供电脑,而我并不需要两台电脑,我想一定有学弟学妹们更需要这部联想电脑,所以决定出售。

指明出售原因。


第三段

 

第   10,11句

我买这部电脑的原价是4500元人民币,现价1500元人民币出售,有感兴趣的同学可以联系我,邮箱是***@126.com.

结尾告知价格和联系方式。

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