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雅思写作技巧:如何写好优缺点作文

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雅思写作技巧:如何写好优缺点作文

好处超过坏处的写法你是不是经常这么写?

第一种: 好处。。。。。

   坏处。。。。。  

   所以:好处超过坏处

 

第二种: 坏处。。。。。

   但是好处更多。。。。。

   所以:好处超过坏处

 

第三种: 好处。。。。。

   坏处。。。。。

   但是好处更多

   所以:好处超过坏处

 

以上写法都不对,如果是我,我会怎么写?

列出好处 1234,体现出坏处虽然存在,但是很小,容易解决,不算问题。

 

雅思写作三种常见的优缺点题的提问方式

Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?  

Discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

Do you think it is a positive or negative thing?

 

首先来讲第一种,Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

 以考官范文 C9 P163 为例: 

The obvious argument 论点 in its favour is that young children pick up languages much more easily 小学学外语的第一个好处。(论据+解释)than teenagers. Their brains are still programmed to (正在做某事)acquire their mother tongue, which非限制性定语从句 facilitates learning another language, and unlike adolescents替换teenagers , they are not inhibited by self-consciousness.  

整个段落在写好处。

 

The greater flexibility of the primary timetable allows for more frequent, shorter sessions and for a play-centred approach, thus maintaining learners’ enthusiasm and progress. Their command of the language in later life will benefit from this early exposure, while learning other languages subsequently will be easier for them. They may also gain a better understanding of other cultures.  

这个段落还在写好处

 

There are, however, some disadvantages. 1 Primary school teachers are generalists, and may not have the necessary language skills themselves. 2 If specialists have to be brought in to deliver these sessions, the flexibility referred to above is diminished. 3 If primary language teaching is not standardised, secondary schools could be faced with a great variety of levels in different languages within their intake, resulting in a classroom experience which undoes the earlier gains. 4 There is no advantage if enthusiastic primary pupils become demotivated as soon as they change schools. However这个词汇出现重点在后, these issues can be addressed strategically within the policy adopted.

开始写坏处了,相较于字数会发现,写坏处的字数依旧超过写好处的字数。

共写了四个坏处,但是注意HOWEVER 引出这些这些问题都是可以被解决的,也就是说前面说的问题都不是问题,这些坏处很小。

 

如果坏处超过好处,要怎么写?先展开坏处,有几点。也有好处,展示好处,但是,这些好处微不足道。所以坏处超过好处。

 

雅思写作技巧:如何写好优缺点作文

另一种问法:Discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

既有好处,又有坏处。这样的写法不能存在于雅思考试里面

大作文要写议论文,如果文章写的是好坏处都有,那谁都知道世间万物都会有好处和坏处,还在写作当中进行事实的阐述属于作者没动脑子去思考,议论文需要讨论出一个方面超过了哪一个方面。这样说才有写作的必要。

  

两种问法写作方式一模一样!但凡问及优缺点两个方面的,都必须说一个方面大,另一个方面小。即把觉得大的方面拿来做立论,把觉得小的方面拿来做驳论!

  

具体可以看C5 T2 P165。

 

第三种问法  Do you think it is a positive or negative thing?

我们看到or 所以我们就选择一个说。